COMIC NARRATIVE WITH CLAIRE
Prompt writing task lesson
In this class we was given prompts and a set amount of time to write out the first thing that came to mind.
The prompts for this page we only had 1 min to come up with something.
we took a wrong turn
We took a wrong turn down the winding path of shadows unknown to everyone in the car the fate that was among us.
a pigeon flew in the window
a pigeon flew in the window smashing through with terminal velocity he broke the sound barrier and tore a hole in the universe.
the bell rang
the bell rang as the guards surrounded us in droves there was no escape
I found my bike
I found my bike in the lockup wasn't hard to guess the gang maybe strong but they are stupid
I went online shopping
I went online shopping and spent it all I don't know but I did
An old lady
An old lady dropped as the timer stopped she knew she wasn't cut out for what is to come
These next few where on 30 second timer
She jumped and caught
she jumped and caught the grenade spinning and throwing it back
The man swung a fist
The man swung a fist missing as the best tore him in half
They tripped
They tripped into the scanner alerting everyone to the position
For this next big one we had 5 mins to come up with
A character is sleepless
These nights I'm always so sleepless usually the hum of the of the city puts me to sleep but on some nights it doesn't happen so easily. its even raining as well just liked that night where it all went wrong.
for these next few we had 30 seconds
Luke spent his lottery winnings on
Luke spent his lottery winnings on an amazing drug filled adventure
What happens if you press the magic button ??
What happens if you press the magic button ?? nothing
Last time I saw Jim was
last time I saw Jim was when he was acting weird looking around the house for something.
This next was 10 minute one
The clock stopped at 10.30am
The clock stopped at 10.30 everything froze around us water stopped the birds stopped in place the world had froze and only I could freely A chilling cold flows through the courtyard as a figure covered in shadow I can make out a small figure. It bellowed out across the courtyard time is short if you do not leave the path you shall be consumed.
3 minute one
It was moving how ??
It was moving but how ? everyone had used all there best abilities on it we are out of stamina and magic there's nothing we can do I cannot move my legs I'm scared i couldn't tell her how I fault.
20 second one
What was the man running from ?
The beast of the village a hulking beaver
she revved up the bike and
went flying into the floor
The doorbell rang
and the door came off the hinges hitting me
It switched on by itself
and started to explain the joke of only a spoonful
30 second ones
When the dog barked I
barked with we had become as one now I wanna sniff butt
The race began
The race against me the caterpillar and a rock
The cupboard burst open
and the dancing spider came out and damn he know
hey wake up
wake up we got a dancing spider to battle he knows the best moves
This was the firs time meeting someone off the internet.
I knew the fact they wanted to somewhere quiet was a bit weird but this girl was so amazing online to talk to and was so cute I knew I wouldn't get this chance again. Nearing the location of our meeting point I smelled blood that iron tang slithered onto my tongue walking further I heard loud splashes and slaps around the corner. I turn to be met with a sight that freezes me in place the girl I was supposed to meet covered in blood surrounded by mangled corpses. her eyes where a bright yellow shining through her blood covered face. she turned at me smiled and said in a soft voice lets go on that date.
Comic/manga transcript page task
The task was to take a comic or manga page and to turn it into a script
Comic script
Black clover
Manga
Finral
Lemiel
silvamillion
Nero
Panel 1
Full body
shot reveal of nero looking to her left at the reader with a serious look in
her eyes.
Sfx aaaaa
Finral:
Nero...?
Panel 2
Close up of
finrals face filled with joy at the sight he sees before him blushing with
smoke pouring out his nose.
Sfx woohoo
Finral:
you’re a girl? A really cute one?
If you’d
told me sooner, we could have dated-
Panel 3
Close up or
neros cold eyes as she glares at him very strongly.
Sfx glare
Nero: …
Panel 4
Pull back to
nero staring and glaring at finral
Sfx glare
Finral:
sorry ….
Nero: …
…
Panel 5
A shot of
lemiel looking out at the clover kingdom for the first time in a very long
time.
Sfx hwoooooo
Lemiel: I
sense magic that’s not of this world from the shadow palace
So he
acquired a body did he?
Panel 6
Close up of
finral looking very confused.
Finral: you two… what in the world…why…?
Next task was to take another script that had been written from a page and draw it out when uploading this to site finding the script was difficult so I am just going to post what I believe is the original page used
5 Limericks and limerick piece
5 things that are special to me and make me happy
I really like to eat food as many people do it helps no matter how I feel one of my favourites since i was little is steak and kidney pie only the pukka pie ones of course no other has that unique taste.
I have always enjoyed manga but recently I got really into reading weekly manga when discovering the Shonen jump app pushed me to catch up and get ahead of a lot of anime I really enjoy.
I have really liked my beard and odd one but i have always seen it adds a lot to my appearance and plus i look like a baby without it.
A fun thing I have picked up while at uni is DnD with my housemates really enjoyed the story we have played through for the past few years and my special character Ringo the bardic frog.
My last special thing is my love for hip hop and rap it has been a great genre which has helped me through many times I love other genres as well.
Limerick 1
I really like to eat lots of food
It helps when I’m in any mood
My fav is steak pie
Without I would die
I would even chomp in the nude how lude
Limerick 2
I immerse in the manga I read
The amazing weekly chapters I need
Binging my hero
Deku growing from zero
Becoming the hero to lead
Limerick 3
Absolutely love my beard
Without I look mega weird
No clue why ginger
I’m not no whinger
Sometimes from its greatness I’m feared
Limerick 4
My DnD boy a frog bard
Only a foot-high life is hard
He never ever picks fights
Fear of the white lights
All he wants is to sit in the yard
Limerick 5
My main music genre is hip hop
Nearly everything is a bop
Helps when on a walk
Better than any talk
Always listening will never stop
The limerick piece
I chose my first limerick for my big piece.
The 6 page comic script
I knew the fact they wanted to somewhere quiet was a bit weird but this girl was so amazing online to talk to and was so cute I knew I wouldn't get this chance again. Nearing the location of our meeting point I smelled blood that iron tang slithered onto my tongue walking further I heard loud splashes and slaps around the corner. I turn to be met with a sight that freezes me in place the girl I was supposed to meet covered in blood surrounded by mangled corpses. her eyes where a bright yellow shining through her blood covered face. she turned at me smiled and said in a soft voice lets go on that date.
Page 1
Characters Main character
Panel 1
Landscape pan of a city at night bright lights beaming
Sound effect
traffic and wind blowing
Panel 2
Shot of a busy shopping street car lanes full both sides and
people shopping and enjoying the late-night shopping scene.
Sound effect
laughing and
chattering with sound of cars driving.
Panel 3
Back shot of the main character as he wonders through the crowds
as if blending in
Sound effect
humming in an off tune coming from the MC
Panel 4
another landscape of
a point of view shot of the MC looking down at his phone which displays the
image of his date on a dating site.
Dialogue
Mc thinks Damn I am so lucky
Page 2
Characters main character
Panel 1
Large portrait shot of the main character looking down an alley
that leads away from the main street it is lively with alley shops and cafes.
Dialogue
MC I love this alley way shame I got to cut through wish we agreed
on here
Sound effect
Glasses rattling
Panel 2
Low shot of the main characters feet quickly walking through
alley past all the outside coffee tables and other people.
Panel 3
Corridor shot of the mc looking around the corner of end of
the alley he had just been walking down here is where the corridor goes from a small
alley filled with shops and cafes to a dark alley filled with pipes and graffiti
with another bend that goes deeper further at the end.
Dialogue
Mc This doesn’t feel right at all I got to double check.
Panel 4
POV shot of his phone again texting Are sure I’m heading to
the right place??
Panel 5
Continued POV shot of his phone in which the response yes sorry I know it’s a bit dodgy but honestly, it’s a great place just a bit dodgy to get too take your time I’m just finishing with something pops up.
Page 3
Characters main character
Panel 1
Shot the MCs face as he ponders the answer, he just received
Sound effect
Pfft
Panel 2
Shot of character putting his phone in his coat pocket
Dialogue
MC what’s the worst that could happen?
Sound effect
Chuckle from the mc
Panel 3
Mc character walking down the dark alley he was just hesitant
to not go down with a slow walk while humming the off tune he was humming
before.
Sfx
Off tune humming
Panel 4
Corridor shot showing the MC has walked a lot further down
the alley the graffiti and number of pipes has just gotten thicker as well as
the pipes are letting out plumes of steam. The MC gives the fumes a sniff as he
walks through them.
Dialogue
MC Hope this stuff isn’t toxic really don’t want to be poisoned
by my own city.
Panel 5
Shot of a turn in the alley and light creeping out of it.
Dialogue
MC finally some light at the end of the tunnel
Page 4
Characters Main character
Panel 1
Shot of the main character as he fast walks around the
corner to be met another long alley with some dinge lighting
Dialogue
MC My god this never ends but…
Panel 2
Panel close up shot of the MC shocked face as what he
notices before him as well as stench that has just hit him as he turned the
corner.
Panel 3
A point of view shot of a trail of blood starting halfway in
the alleyway and trailing to around the next turn at the end of the alleyway
where a brighter light is beaming out of.
Sfx MC coughing
Dialogue
MC My god that blood is strong the copper tang has roasted
my tongue and nostrils something’s not right.
Panel 4
Blank
Dialogue
MC thinks I really don’t want to meet the same fate but my date
it could be her and I’m just going to run hell no.
Panel 5
The MC runs around full sprint down the alley and around the
corner nearly slipping on the blood
Dialogue
MC thinks damn what’s that noise?
Sound effects
Loud steps as MC runs
Splashing and slicing noises from around the bend.
Page 5
character
The Date in white
A full page spread of
a shot of the date stood down an open dead end with a light shining directly
down onto her. She is surrounded by ten mangled corpses shredded and sliced in somewhat
of a circle around her as she stands still covered from in blood dripping off
her into the pool of blood collected around her. You can see from the few spots
not coated in thick blood she was wearing a white summer dress but besides that
you can only make out her eyes from the side angle you are looking on pure bright
yellow eyes as they beam through the dark reds of the blood she is covered in.
Sound effects
The light above the girl buzzing
The flies buzzing around the corpses
The drip of the blood into the pool below her
Page 6
The date in white
The main character
Panel 1
Close up shot the date as she turns her head suddenly
towards the main character her hair flicking blood to the floor in a spray as
her eyes beam at him with no emotion.
Sound effects
Quiet splatter against concrete
Panel 2
Shot of the MCs characters eyes as he starts to lose it and you can see the reflection of the girl staring right at him.
Dialogue
MC thinks holy crap I knew this was a bad idea too good to
be true my god what am I going to do.
Panel 3
Landscape shot of the character putting both hands up and surrendering
to the girl as he shakes with fear explaining that he will just leave and forget
anything before being interrupted
Dialogue
MC think Hopefully she lets me go
Mc says please I won’t tell anybody, and we can just ou………
Date interrupts him saying What you on about silly??
Sound effect’s
MC Shaking.
Panel 4
Shot of the girl tilting her head and smiling with a massive
grin as she explains we are still going on that date as the MC stands there in
fear and confusion.
Dialogue
Date We still going on this date, right??
MC thinks Eh??
The end for now
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